Friday, September 27, 2019

Purposeful Use and Integration of Quotes




ELIMINATE DROPPED QUOTATIONS
Always use proper signal phrases

You need to integrate borrowed material naturally into your own work so that it reads smoothly as part of your paper.  You will not ever have a sentence that is entirely from an outside source. 

Monday, September 23, 2019

Outlining: Step 1


Step 1: Review your assignment topic directions carefully.  Make sure that you know the key words the instructor is looking for in your thesis, the style of writing, and how to approach it.



For example, from essay 1’s assignment directions…
Write a proposal argument in which you address the question, “What needs to be done to address the opioid crisis in the United States?”

Key words for your thesis: propose, do, opioid crisis, in America
Style of writing: argument
How to approach it: proposal (which means you must actually propose specific changes that will alleviate the opioid crisis in America.  You will not research what others are doing to fix it…you are ‘proposing’ changes to the way things are currently run in America with regard to opioids.  You may make modifications to things that are already being done.  You make entirely new suggestions.  You will not simply report on what is already being done.)




For example, from essay 2’s assignment directions…
Write an ethical argument in which you address the question:
“How far should scientists go to modify humans through genetic engineering?”

Key words for your thesis: ethics, how far, scientists, modify humans, genetic engineering
Style of writing: argument
How to approach it: ethical argument (which means it needs a declared standard for ethics—such as Christian ethics)




For example, from essay 3’s assignment directions…
Write a cause and effect argument in which you address the question,
“How has social media impacted American culture?”

Key words for your thesis: causes, effects, social media, impacts, American culture
Style of writing: argument
How to approach it: causal argument (which means it needs to declare specific causes of the effects on American culture by social media)








Outlining: Step 2




Step 2: Write out one sentence that includes the overall TOPIC in the ARGUMENT STYLE (proposal, ethical, or causal) with 3 clear reasons (which will become your body paragraphs later).

Topic + argument + reason 1 + reason 2 + reason 3


For example, if I were to write a proposal paper on human trafficking, I could have a thesis like this:

"The problem of human trafficking that runs rampant throughout the United States could potentially be solved through the implementation of prevention presentations in middle schools, awareness programs for parents, and greater punishments for people involved in human trafficking."



Now, your thesis does not have to mirror this exact format, but this formula is helpful for an easily structured argument! Give it a try.  You cannot go wrong!


Outlining: Step 3




Step 3: Break the three reasons—from your thesis—into the sections for your argument body paragraphs.

For the outline, you can easily translate the thesis to a more fleshed out outline by converting each of your reasons into one body paragraph for each of the ‘reasons’.  See the body paragraph outlined sections below.

REASON 1 = BODY PARAGRAPH 1

I. Implementation of prevention presentations in middle schools can help young teenagers develop awareness of human trafficking.
               a. These presentations could provide youth with methods of self-defense to keep them safe.
               b. Problems cannot be solved if people are unaware of the issue.


REASON 2 = BODY PARAGRAPH 2

II. Awareness programs for parents can provide tools parents can use in their daily lives to keep their children safe.
a.      Parents might not be aware of the dangers human trafficking poses to their children in their area of the world.
b.      By bringing awareness to parents, the parents can then share the information with their children,
which will help provide further insight for the children.



REASON 3 = BODY PARAGRAPH 3

III. Greater punishments for people involved in human trafficking could potentially lessen the number of people involved in this crime.
a.      Having a more intense consequence could keep potential criminals from getting involved with
human trafficking because the risk will be greater if they are caught.
               b. The level of punishment can also help people realize the gravity of the crime.



Using your own thoughts to defend your ideas is critical for developing a good outline, and even more so for creating a strong essay.

If you rely too heavily on source material, your argument will no longer be your argument. You want the readers to know what you think, not what other people think. That is not to say that you shouldn't use sources. On the contrary, you should use sources, but ONLY WHEN THEY defend your own ideas by helping bolster your argument! 70%-80% of the writing should be your argument and ideas, and in your words—using 3rd person voice.  20%-30% will be source materials that are used to DEFEND your argument.  Do not use sources to MAKE the argument. For help understanding the 80/20 Rule, visit https://learnessaystrategies.blogspot.com/2019/02/8020-and-eliminating-direct-quotes.html





Outlining: Step 4



Step 4: Create logical argument flow and progression of the content for your outline.  To create your outline, you will follow the structure below.

Outline (General Concepts)

Outlines will vary depending on the exact goal of the piece, but every outline should contain the following elements:
Post your thesis—here—at the top so that it can easily be located before starting.

Post Thesis: _____

Introduction Stages:
_____


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Body Paragraph 1:
_____


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Body Paragraph 2:
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Body Paragraph 3:
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Counter-argument paragraph--when required:
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Conclusion paragraph:
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Remember that this is a rough guide for essays in our class.  Every essay comes with different challenges, and so this is the general outline for moving your argument along. 

Variances can occur in the body paragraphs, though.  Sometimes you will need to create more hamburger method/source sandwiches to defend multiple angles of your argument in that paragraph.  Nonetheless, remember, if you are writing an argument, you will need at least one counter-argument body paragraph, and maybe a second one if it is a very long paper (10+ pages).  However, the introduction and the conclusion should follow the three-sentence plans for proper structural flow.


Use these links for extra help.

Structured Parts of an OUTLINE






Outlining: Step 5


Step 5: Locate source material that supports what you are arguing in your outline. 

Make sure the source material is supporting what you were arguing…do not let the sources make the arguments for you.  The sources need to support and defend your argument.  You are not simply writing a research report of other people’s ideas and arguments on the issue..

Once you have completed the steps above, it is time to go back and include some research support showing that you know how to properly include outside source information as well as cite it.  For help in adding in the defending sources, see the Hamburger Method: https://learnessaywriting.blogspot.com/p/hamburger-method-drafting-your-essay.html

The 'Soul' and the 'Science' of the Opioid Crisis



Resources to Help with 
the 'Soul' and the 'Science' of the Opioid Crisis

There are suggested scholarly source readings posted to the classroom; however, you can feel free to review the items below for opinions, statistics, reliable viewpoints, and general perceptions of the issue.  

For insights into what the Church is doing about the crisis, see the classroom readings or the two articles below.


Meyer, Holly. "Religious groups help transform addiction from moral failure to treatable disease." USA Today. 15 Apr. 2017. Gannett Satellite Information Network. 23 Sept. 2019 <https://www.usatoday.com/story/news/nation-now/2017/04/13/houses-of-worship-battle-addictions/100406200/>.


Stetzer, Ed. "The Church's Response to the Opioid Crisis: Practical Tool Kit for Faith-Based Leaders." The Exchange | A Blog by Ed Stetzer. 18 Jan. 2018. 23 Sept. 2019 <https://www.christianitytoday.com/edstetzer/2018/january/churchs-response-to-opioid-crisis-practical-tool-kit-for-fa.html>.

Saturday, September 14, 2019

Cause and Effect Outline

For help with idea progression and development in a Proposal Argument, Ethical Argument, or Cause and Effect Argument assignment, please see these outline examples from “Chapter 11” of The Well-Crafted Argument.
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Textbook Reading: Week 6
Chapter 11: 7a
Outlining a Cause and Effect Argument
Many students avoid writing an outline for various reasons; however, the benefits of writing a complete and well-organized outline are significant. Reluctant students should remember that outlines can be revised during the actual drafting of the essay. In addition, time spent on a quality outline will be saved exponentially when drafting the essay itself.

Proposal Argument Outline

https://owl.excelsior.edu/argument-and-critical-thinking/argumentative-purposes/argumentative-purposes-proposal/






Textbook Reading: Week 2
Chapter 11: 3
Outlining a Proposal Argument
Many students avoid writing an outline for various reasons; however, the benefits of writing a complete and well-organized outline are significant. Reluctant students should remember that outlines can be revised during the actual drafting of the essay. In addition, time spent on a quality outline will be saved exponentially when drafting the essay itself.



                I.    Introduction
                                                       I.            Hook your audience. (Relate it to the problem and proposed solution in your thesis)
                                                     II.            Identify the problem. (Give background/ context to help your audience clearly understand the problem.  Do not use any source materials in this section)
                                                  III.            State your thesis (Make a clear argument proposing a feasible solution to the problem. It is best to use an essay map with your thesis.)
             II.    Several Body Paragraphs (Many prefer for opposing viewpoints to be final body paragraph before the conclusion; however, it can be included in any order in the body of the essay.)
                                                       I.            Topic Sentence: Directly supports the thesis argument about your proposed solution and clearly identifies the topic of each individual body paragraph by breaking down the argument from the essay map.
                                                     II.            Argument Development: Establish the belief system of the topic being argued in the paragraph.  Focus is on clearly detailing the argument point(s) and then following the writer’s argument with the evidence and then analysis sentences.
                                                  III.            Evidence: Example(s), fact(s), etc. from correctly cited quotes, paraphrases, and/or summaries that support your main point of the topic sentence relating it to the thesis and providing additional information about the problem. (Must relate to the proposed changes that you are arguing.)
                                                  IV.            Analysis: Your explanation of how the evidence supports the topic sentence/thesis statement. Include benefits of your proposal and clarify how it will solve the problem. (Avoid using first and second person pronouns in all academic writing.)
                                                     V.            Summative Sentence: Reiterates the topic sentence in a new way and transitions your ideas from one paragraph to the next. (Use appropriate transitional words and sentences throughout your essay to help you essay flow well for your reader.)
          III.    One or More Body Paragraphs to Discuss Opposing Viewpoints
                                                       I.            Topic Sentence: Introduces opposing viewpoint(s).
                                                     II.            Refutation: Explanation of why you disagree. (Avoid first and second person pronouns.)
                                                  III.            Development: of why you disagree and why your proposal is better than the opposition.
                                                  IV.            Facts, examples, to support your disagreement—if applicable—of the opposition.
                                                     V.            Summative Sentence: Wraps up the paragraph and refutation of the opposing viewpoint and includes a transition into the conclusion paragraph.
           IV.    Conclusion Paragraph
                                                       I.            Restates your thesis claim in a new way.
                                                     II.            Summarizes main points of your body paragraphs.
                                                  III.            Leaves reader with final thought and/or call to action.






The outline above has been modified from the content in “Chapter 11: The Elements of Argument (Section 11-3: Proposal Argument)” of LUC: White & Billings, The Well-Crafted Argument (2018). 
Additional information for the clearest outline and essay possible has been added to the original outline sample from that textbook.  Please follow the outline layout above for the Proposal Argument Outline assignment in this ENGL101 course.
















For help with idea progression and development in a Proposal ArgumentEthical Argument, or Cause and Effect Argument assignment, please see these outline examples from “Chapter 11” of The Well-Crafted Argument.



© J. Lynn H. Dick, 2019
For Educational Purposes Only






Essay 3 Cause/Effect Argument

Design and Development Handouts

· Know the Guidelines: Cause/Effect Argument Essay Writing—view the planning, outlining, and development handouts for the cause/effect essay.

· Sample thesis for a causal argument: this handout shows a sample cause/effect THESIS, the break-down of that THESIS, and how the essay would be structured to develop and argue the THESIS.

· Flow, Length, and Content of a Typical Body-paragraph: a specific break-down of what is expected in a well-developed body-paragraph of an argument paper.

· Need Ideas for Cause/Effect Essay??: this handout provides 'spring-board' articles and images to help you think through how you feel about the topic and possible cause/effect relationships. These are not scholarly sources. They are simply readings to help you understand different ideas surrounding the issue.